Monday, February 17, 2020
my birthday. (100 word story)
“Ahh” Me, Faith and Abby said as we watched the scariest movie in our lifetime!! It was my b-day and us three girls went to timezone, the movies and more places. My cousin Joseph was at his dads, my cousin Aria was at our Nana's house, my cousin Phoenix and my uncle Mikaere went up north so it was only me, Abby, Faith, Aunty amber and the twins (Stella and Luna). Ohh yeah and after we watched the scary movie we got rid of the scariness out of our system so we watched the new Spongebob movie. It was insane!
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Hi The story is so cool. I like how you used a lot punctuation but next time and you put people in but what kind of scary movie. Did you see you should go back and add it or take words out or craft it?
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