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Thursday, February 13, 2020

 My QE2 trip
On Thursday the 10th of October in the school holidays, my Aunty Amber , my cousin Aria and I walked to QE2 to go for a swim. On the way just down the road from Amber's street we walked passed Noah morris. He said hi to me and I said hi back to him. After we walked passed him Amber said that I went bright red. when we walked down the road more we walked past Summah’s dad’s car and I waved to Summah and she waved back to me. Then down the road from there we walked passed a rich person's house, they had a built in pool, a built in tennis court, a nice fancy house, a great fancy garden and i felt jealous that they were rich and I wasn't.  After we walked past the rich persons house we went around the corner and to Our left was the QE2 entrance we walked into the entrance and then we walked to sit on the step to wait for Makaire, Joseph and Pheonix. when they got there we went thru the doors and we paid then we went in the pool. I looked after Joseph when he wanted to play on the little playground. He played on the blue slide and I just sat of on the side and watched him. he kept going on the slide for most of the time

1 comment:

  1. I think your story is great because you you used lots of descriptive words
    this story makes me think about when I went to QE2
    may I suggest you put more descriptive words .

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