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Monday, May 4, 2020

Ghost in the Forest






I'm walking in the forest. I hear something. What do I hear? Ahh what is that? It sounded like a g-g-g-ghost! OMG OMG what do I do. Ah ah ah. I don't know. I looked behind me hahh there was fog and a ghost in the f-f-f-fog. What should I do, should I run or should I hide? I DON'T KNOW! I'm scared. Where are my friends? I was with them five minutes ago. WHAT SHOULD I DO!!!!!!!! Am i going to die? I don't wanna die!


How do I get out of here? HELLLLP!!!!! Is is that what I think it is? Is it a ghost?I think it is! John,mary help, where are you guys? AHH HELP ME I'M GETTING TAKEN AWAY FROM HERE. Hey where am i?




...to be continued...
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4 comments:

  1. NigelMay 4, 2020 at 6:45 PM

    Hi Kaylee, great start to your story. You have created a lot of tension. Hope the friends are found in the fog.

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    1. AnonymousJune 2, 2020 at 2:40 PM

      ha ha thank you for the comment Mr Nigel

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  2. BeckyMay 5, 2020 at 4:36 PM

    Hi Kaylee,
    Your writing makes me think this could be a scary adventure. I'm wondering where you got taken to and if you are out of the fog. I can't wait to read the next part of your story. Awesome work.

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  3. AnonymousJune 2, 2020 at 2:47 PM

    thank you Becky.i will end up writing the next part when i have the chance to.yes it is a scary adventure.

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