Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 22, 2020
News Report
We are doing this news report for our inquiry at school.
10 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.
Hi Kaylee, Your group has done a really good job of planning your news article. I like that you have thought about how it makes you feel working on a project. Remember when you post a blog to check it makes sense. There seems to be a few spaces missing. Great writing.
ReplyDeletehi Becky thank you for the comment. i will try and fix up my mistakes next time.
DeleteHi Kaylee, you and Abby have been working really hard with this. I tried to watch the video but it doesn't seem to be working. Come and see me and we will see if we can fix this, I think it might be too long so we will have to upload it another way.
ReplyDeleteOK. thank you Urmi for trying to help. I will come to you tomorrow and get it fixed
DeleteYou and Abby have worked very hard on your script and your video. Remember to check your post on preview to see if everything is working. Brooke and Urmi have offered to help with the video so make use of their skills : >
ReplyDeletethank you Sharon. its a great help that you printed the scrips out for us.
ReplyDeleteHi Kaylee i like that your doing a news report but unfornutley i cant see the video
ReplyDeletei know it doesn't let anyone see it:(
Deletehello kaylee i like your news report but sadley l cannot see the video
ReplyDeletei know it doesn't let anyone see it sadly :(
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