Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, September 22, 2020
The house
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Hi Kaylee!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really cool short story. I love the describing words you used. Just remember that when someone is doing a new action or has just started speaking, to start on a new line.
From Mak :)
Hi Kaylee
ReplyDeleteI like how you added a picture of what you were inspired by
Next time you should reread and check some of your spelling (hevaly=heavily)
But apart from that love your story :)
Hi Kirsten
DeleteThank you for spotting that mistake and letting me know.
Ill make sure to change it.
Hi Kaylee that is a great story you have written I can't wait to see you in Tangaroa next year.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Kaylee, great story, ka pai!!
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