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Thursday, September 10, 2020

The Road

One gloomy day, as I was biking along the road I used to live on before the earthquakes happened. I saw a path I haven't seen before. I decided to go down and see what was down there. As I was biking down the mysterious road I saw a  big drop, so I hopped off my bike and looked down there. I saw... nothing but rocks and stones down there. I don't really know what to call it. I looked beside me and saw there was a fence. I held onto the fence and started walking down the steep slope then I took my hands off. 

2 comments:

  1. good work and put more full stop.

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  2. Good job keep is up
    you got me for a second

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