Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, October 30, 2020
Cats who needs them?
The story of: Slenderman
Thursday, October 29, 2020
broken flying cliff
click, clank, clonk, went rocks as half of a cliff fell off. Suddenly a buzzing type alien spaceship sound started. the owners of the barn Dale and Lindy came out of there barn. 'huh?' said the married couple. there dog on the other side of the cliff was barking as loud as 9,999 wolfs howling all together. 'REX!' yelled Dale. 'are you ok?' cried Lindy. the married couple started getting worried. both sides of the cliff started to raise higher up, up, up into the sky over the clouds.
Friday, October 23, 2020
The Mall
Hear: Small children crying, MC Donald's food sizzling,
Smell: Cheesy delights cooking, other peoples perfume,
Taste: sweet lolly drinks swirling around my mouth
Feel: cold shiver down my spine.
Friday, October 16, 2020
Fairground
I could see the bright flashing lights from a mile away, getting closer and closer. Stabbing rainbow lights were blinding me as I was heading towards the fairground. The glowing pink smoke coloured the night sky. The giant ferris wheel spinning round and round. As I arrived I saw the excitement on peoples’ faces.
As I got there I could hear blood curdling screams and parents saying “stay close”. A massive crowd as big as all the carnival rides and People shouting loud but joyful screams, as people having the best time of their lives. The pumping music is as loud as 15K lions roaring.
I started walking around. I walked past the popcorn stand. The smell of salty, buttery popcorn making me want to go turn around and gobble it all up. An array of unique foods smelling better than ever, until the stinky farm animals broke the chain of the, popcorn smell and changed it to a stinky stench.