Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, October 29, 2020
broken flying cliff
click, clank, clonk, went rocks as half of a cliff fell off. Suddenly a buzzing type alien spaceship sound started. the owners of the barn Dale and Lindy came out of there barn. 'huh?' said the married couple. there dog on the other side of the cliff was barking as loud as 9,999 wolfs howling all together. 'REX!' yelled Dale. 'are you ok?' cried Lindy. the married couple started getting worried. both sides of the cliff started to raise higher up, up, up into the sky over the clouds.
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