See: glowing lights, kiddy car rides only 2$
Hear: Small children crying, MC Donald's food sizzling,
Smell: Cheesy delights cooking, other peoples perfume,
Taste: sweet lolly drinks swirling around my mouth
Feel: cold shiver down my spine.
Hear: Small children crying, MC Donald's food sizzling,
Smell: Cheesy delights cooking, other peoples perfume,
Taste: sweet lolly drinks swirling around my mouth
Feel: cold shiver down my spine.
I could feel a cold shiver running up and down my spine as i walk up to the entrance knowing i'm getting something. The excitement in my eyes showed mum how much I loved the mall. I couldn't stop the excitement running through my body from making me run up to MC Donald's.
I could hear my worst nightmare, little kids screaming at the top of there lungs. The sound of MC Donald's potato chips and the beef patties sizzling in the deep fryer and on the stove. cash registers opening and closing.
I can see lots of different coloured glowing lights all around me.
Hi Kaylee, you have done really well at describing how the mall makes you feel and how it affects your senses. Ka pai.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of describing words Kaylee, screaming children is my worst nightmare too! If you get a chance to finish this, I would to read the rest.
ReplyDeleteLove your descriptive words. You use them well. So well done and it truly gives us a good idea of how u feel
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