The scenery behind them is big white clouds that remind me of delicious candy floss. The pilot of the plane sees something in the corner of his eye. he looks he stares he sees.... two tiny boys sitting on the wing. how did they get there he asked himself.
Monday, October 12, 2020
The plane and boys
Two little boys about the age of five, sitting on the wing of a bright shiny blue plane, one boy pointing down with a smiling face as the other one looking down surprised. they're clothes waving around as the engine of the plane is as loud as 5,000 grisly bears.
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Well done Kaylee, you have used some great descriptive language. I like the way you have said that the big white clouds remind you of delicious candy floss. Just where you have said 'they're' clothes, it needs to be 'their'. 'They're' is a contraction, short for 'they are' and 'their' means it belongs to them.
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